All Comments on 'Turning 25'

by Perky_Goth_Chick

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
some memories

This story brought back some rather plesant memories of my loves deflowerment. I sent her a link, I am impressed by your imagery and fluid use of character, dialogue and action. Graphic enough for extreme enjoyment, Tantalizing at the same time. Quite impressive.

-Treefrog

Texguy84Texguy84about 19 years ago
Excellent story

Loved the story, especially the funny line at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow

holy cow that was great... you need to write a book filled with stories like that lol... it makes me want to light a smoke :)

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trippychick everwhere else lol:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
this is a seven!

Such an erotic story I began at times to forget we were in the realms of the faerie and more in the world of the firey. Well written, with the right pace, right level of detail and the capacity to produce in me a right hard-on and for my partner Noah's flood. So when is the Christmas story out?! Definitely a seven out of 5 :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow

I Can Honestly Say That You Are Now My Favorite Writer On This Site. And Thats Really Saying Something Isnt It? Masterfully Written. You MUST Write More Stories Like This. Ive Read All Your Storys And Love Them All. If You Wrote A Bunch Of These It Would Make A Wonderful Book Of Short Stories. Id Buy It. Affectionatly, Lovelyevenindeath

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WOW

wow. you should definetly right more stories. maybe even a sequel to this. i absolutely loved it. its a shame the rating scale doesn't go higher though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
W-O-W

Hmmm best one I have read!

DarkJoyDarkJoyover 17 years ago
"Sweet Bacchus, I love a lusty virgin."

Classic lines, excellent writing, humour and sexxx- you've got it all! Well done and please please please write more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You have talent, and my undivided attention

Excellent stories, most writers have one or two stories with your quality.

I loved all of your stories.

Excellent plot, characters, delivery.

Tasty erotic play.

Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Love it!!!

You need to write a sequel to this please! You're such an awesome writer! I've read this story twice already! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Christmas

Please don't forget to write the Christmas story in this line. Maybe another story explaining the female hobgoblin. =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Very well written, and that was just plain fun! ^.^

bowlerhatbowlerhatover 13 years ago
great

nice and simple, very smooth

gaelic_wanderergaelic_wandererabout 10 years ago
Super Birthday Story

Oh, hell. Super story period. I think this story will make many want to have a birthday gift like this. Very well written - the introduction, the seduction, the foreplay and the sex all have a delightful quality to them. I am fascinated and enchanted. This from someone who seldom reads in the non-human genre.

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