All Comments on 'Outdoors Training Ch. 01'

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Wise_ManWise_Manover 16 years ago
Great Start

Cant wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice

This story was totally fucking HOT!! i loved it... i hope my Dom will too when i ask Him to read it!! (and maybe treat me to the same type of trip:o)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
oh yes

he senses she's one to have and keep.he slowly gains her trust,she finds she really likes him,feels safe with him.i see a win-win relationship for them,as he trains her to become his toy.maybe you'll write chapter 2,3 and more...thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Oh Hell Yes!!

I fucking love stories where they start out un willing and in the middle of it learn to love it. Like getiing damn near raped..canit wait for part 2..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

loved it!...

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