All Comments on 'In The Time To Come'

I do like your plot as it was unique and rather refreshing - kinda dark though where 'John' killed the real Camile and even made his own robot with the intention of taking over the world. If it was make into a movie I think it will sell quite well. The thing is we are doing reading here and the sex part wasn't that erotic or arousing - quite technical. It would be better if you really make it more explosive. Oh, well.

Sci-fi and horror rolled into one...what more can a girl want? Thanks for the read!

I totally did not see that coming! I've always had fantasies about robot lovers but now I'm not so sure. Great job! It scared the crap outta meXD

has a really fucked up ending. Perhaps another category would be better. That last bit was certainly more like Horror. Shit.

Nice twist. Clever idea!