All Comments on 'Your Surprise Becomes Mine'

At least the style of your writing seems to suggest that. Good fantasy for those who like the hard-and-fast style. Keep the stories coming!

Nicely written, which is a pleaseant surprise. Excellent attitude, and loved the dirty talk. More please.

Loved the switch in who was screwing who! Didn't care for the action of going fromt her cunt to her ass then back again. Maybe because I work in the medical field I know how dangerous that is. But he rest was HOT. Keep up the great work! Loved it!

I am clearly imagining the mien of the girl while I am reading this story. Moreover, I have a weird feeling I would like to muffle myself up in a poncho, I would like to bundle up.

It has nothing to do with the subject, bit I notice that many words from diplomacy are French by nature, even more they are spelled with diacritics, such as démarche, communiqué, détente, chargé d'affaires and attaché. Though, these words are quite equitable in nature.