All Comments on 'Training Mom'

Hey Story Teller,

Great Idea, and a good story to go along with it. Keep it up!

i totally enjoyed the writing and the way the story weaved and that it had a lot of unexpected turns. thank You for the pleasant reading

loved it.

The mom gets herself confused with her stepdaughter? How the hell do you even MANAGE that?

Read the story more carefully and you'll understand how it happened!

And I never comment about the author. But this was so crappy that I have to wonder if you couldn't benefit from psychological help?

I like the basic idea but I find it hard to believe she couldn't prove he'd made a mistake and still paid him... more thought should have been put in to that detail.

Also, that bitch of a daughter still never got broken... the mom is still a trained helpless slut too.

How did the trainer even find out about this and what does it have to do with the piano instructor?

I guess he want to marry the mother and the daughter cares abut her more now? Sort of a happy ending I guess, but not fulfilling.

I like the basic idea but I find it hard to believe she couldn't prove he'd made a mistake and still paid him... more thought should have been put in to that detail.

Also, that bitch of a daughter still never got broken... the mom is still a trained helpless slut too.

How did the trainer even find out about this and what does it have to do with the piano instructor?

I guess he want to marry the mother and the daughter cares abut her more now? Sort of a happy ending I guess, but not fulfilling.

finish a story before you release it . at least 1 story