All Comments on 'Spaghetti and'

Could have developed more the idea of a wife so horny she sees phallic symbols everywhere she turns, but still an enjoyable read.

I suppose you would also have suggested to Van Gogh that red carnations would have more of an impact. This was MP3's submission and should be judged entirely on that basis and not on what you or any other reader wishes it to be. I enjoyed it and look forward to seeing that couple in my favourite Italian restaurant.