All Comments on 'Disobeying Master'

Not bad, a bit short and could use some character development. I enjoyed the overall story.

naughty please make the next chapter much longer. love your picture hope its really you

I also thought it was hot when he called her nigger. More of this, please.

There is never any justification using the N-word! For shame!

We so need more interracial stories with black women and white men. Nothing gets me hotter than a smokin submissive black girl. The use of nigger. Yeah I cringe too but understand some people participate in "race play" You certainly don't hear anyone complaining about the millions of stories with some black dude balling his"cracker whore" keep em coming!

I love this but I feel it could be longer you have a great way with words and I want to hear more... I would love to chat with you if possible jones.mimi50 yahoo.com

This is soooo hot white men I. Control the way it should be