by sirhugs
You need to finish the story! That was a hot sexy story. I loved it but you have to finish it.
Said Oliver Twist, Amyfriend and Blondegirl85. Pretty please. There just has to be a continuation.
it---Not much difference between sex with a drunk and rape.
Would've enjoyed the story more had you just focused on the drunk teen and the older man. Thats all the readers care about.
Very good so far..Keep it going...
Forget the 2 fools that read it and then didn't like..
Write more soon???
Well, I know it's all just play acting, but try telling that to my wet pussy! MORE PLEASE. [Here's a laugh - the security code I need to enter is 27DD]
oMG..i love the story and i even fingered myself.. i was so wet.. i want huge cock buried in my wet and hot pussy..continue pls?
That was pretty good. I agree with the other readers. There needs to be more. I am sure that every man out there with a daughter has had thoughts like that of thier friends.They just won't admit it.
Great literary device, having the double layer of erotcism, one in TIna's narrative and the other in the narrator's first person. Talk about double the hotness!
Could have spent more time fucking her. And another orgasm would have been good. Plus stepdaughter could have joined in.