All Comments on 'Canning Mr. Wrong'

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WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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Okay, so this is about canning a man for real? Is he chopped up into chunks? Reminds me of some older poems of mine. One was about me being in a box and the box having my arms and legs and running down the stairs and tripping my ex and he dies. Anyway, reminds me of my fun, sadistic poetry. You need to write a part two, where there's a food shortage because of a natural disaster and the only thing left to eat is... well, he'd finally be good for something.

Under_SunUnder_Sunover 16 years ago
ew~

You are one sick puppy! Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
this is great

we have all had a mr. wrong to whom we wanted to do this - or something equally horrific. yours sounds so much prettier than what i wanted to do.. and that is the perfect touch. something so twilight zone-ish expressed poetically.. so pretty and so deadly. keep writing i love your style. slavegurl

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Is that a maniacal laugh I hear as a jar of pickled pecker is examined?

Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaover 16 years ago
Like Alexandria Spofford

who turned her husband into a set of plaid place mats...

Good recipe, too!

Dale_ArdenDale_Ardenover 16 years ago
Deliciously vengeful image

but I think I would have composted him myself. Great poem. :-)

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE CANNING PROCESS

is becoming a lost family art, TK U MLJ LV NV

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