All Comments on 'Lucky's Lucky Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice build up

Please continue, the pace is good, the seduction better!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 16 years ago
hot

hmmm, more please great story can't wait to see where it leads

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice one!

great start you can't leave it there, please continue and don't make us wait too long!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Applause Applause

As you can see, we like interracial without the stupid braindead cliches and sick crudeness.<P>

More please - keep up the fine work.<P>

With Regard

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Nice

Great pace, like the switch between male and female point of view, wonderfully written, great grammatics, and lovely seduction. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Beginning

Great beginning. I can't wait to read more. And thank God it's not one of those boring black guy with a huge willy or black woman whore stories. Those kinds of stories are so tired.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice Introduction...

GREAT BEGINNING!

jes1701jes1701over 16 years ago
Incredible start !!!!!

Incredible start, its so suductive and hot as hell dont stop please

SatisfyableSatisfyableover 16 years ago
I love it!

Well written and riveting, I couldn't stop reading, can't wait for the rest

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mmmmmm?

Is this going to lead to some panty dropping action?

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