by Syri07
great start you can't leave it there, please continue and don't make us wait too long!
As you can see, we like interracial without the stupid braindead cliches and sick crudeness.<P>
More please - keep up the fine work.<P>
With Regard
Great pace, like the switch between male and female point of view, wonderfully written, great grammatics, and lovely seduction. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Great beginning. I can't wait to read more. And thank God it's not one of those boring black guy with a huge willy or black woman whore stories. Those kinds of stories are so tired.
Incredible start, its so suductive and hot as hell dont stop please
Well written and riveting, I couldn't stop reading, can't wait for the rest