All Comments on 'Fun with Deepak Ch. 01'
by Babli5
- 17 Comments
Anonymousover 16 years agoi loved your story and please do write more such stories. It was simply beautiful
SEANACHIEover 16 years agoI expect that you will continue to develop this story line in the future. I also expect that your skills will develop with practice. A good start. Good luck!
atul_atsover 16 years agoThis was really erotic... but one thing... initially it was difficult to identify if a girl or a boy was narrating the story... good work done... i expect a sequel from u...
Anonymousabout 15 years agoDescribe how wet, hairy your armpits were and their musky smell that excited Deepak.
Anonymousover 12 years agoSo it starts of with a woman having the hots for another woman, this Mrs.S and then she has a fling with a guy on the bus? Or does it start of with a guy having the hots for Mrs.S and then suddenly almost magically chnages his sex while on the bus to a girl????
Motorpenisover 12 years agoThe beginning is confusing but yes the story is good. For a while i thought that it was about the gay adventures of a dude called Deepak.
bullusover 12 years agoI also was unaware that it was from a woman's point of view as the story unfolded. But still, good start with the daring act in public.
Scotsman69over 12 years agois a fine way to begin. And it only gets better. Thank you.
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