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OOOOoooo! More please!
It just keeps getting better! Please, please, keep going with this story line, can't wait to read the next part!
New fan here
You've got me hooked on this story, and I'm so glad to hear that it will be updated regularly! Yeee haw!
Can't wait to read more.
This is a great story, I'm totally hooked! - Actually I like most of your stuff!
Okay, I'm jealous
This is a wonderful story and the characters leap off the page. You've made this a very enjoyable Sunday morning for me. Thank you.
OK, I'm hooked!
How naughty of you to move house and take a holiday right in the middle of this fantastic story! I don't have to tell you it's outstanding as everyone else here has. Love it, will be waiting in eager anticipation for more.
Your 'darkness' is caling to US!
Your charcters are fantastic and the story is well-written.
Please PLEASE can we expect further chapters soon?? Your 'darkness' needs to see your readers' lights!
fun fun fun
Oh what a fun story! Excited to start reading the next chapter!
really enjoying it
enjoying your story :-) nice to find and original idea so beautifully written.
disapointed...
... that you didnt draw out her eavesdropping into his fantasies before they found each other. The idea is hot as hell to me and would of really liked to see more of that... even so the story is one of my favs! love and have read everything youve written(more than once). so thank you for that
Hot as hell, yes
Even without the juicy bits. Great writing!
Holy hell
I am slowly making my way through your work and am just so delighted with your way of telling stories. You have a real talent for creating vivid, suspenseful plots. I'm a fan!
EEEEPPP!! :D
i remember when my husband and i first saw each other - we too knew we had never met each other, but we knew that we knew each other! it was incredible, unforgettable! still today, 7 years later, despite all our differences - we 'feel' each other. we call each other at the same time, reach out for each other. he is so possessive too. i love him insatiably!
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