All Comments on 'Dream'

This short romantic scene is above Literotica and I encourage you to publish it elsewhere. It's well-written and you paint a beautiful romantic portrait of Seattle, and eventhough it was brief, it makes me want to go there. The romance is strong, even when being subtle and this type of work goes to show that you don't have to write X-rated, hardcore stuff in order to make an impact. I loved this little piece so much. I'm also a classical music fan and opera fan and this one is a treat for all of like-minded music lovers. Very nicely done.

For goodness sake man, learn some english, learn to spell and try reading your story through, do your corrections before you paste it up.