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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/28/07

You're BAAAAACK!!!!!!

Welcome back!

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by PepperTedII09/20/07

a classic touch

Dear Anne

it is good to see you writing. I loved this piece, it took me right into the room with you both.

many thanks

PepperTed

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by Celeste99910/15/07

Untitled? I suppose we could summon up adjectives that could adequately title this submission. Words like bewitching, mesmerizing, or spellbinding? Perhaps magnificent, spectacular, or beautiful? Perhaps tantalizing, arousing, or delicious?

Anne - you are a beautiful person. Thanks for another wonderful short story. I hope that you write again soon.

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by Fubar2k01/01/08

Untitled!

Excellent. Really excellent.

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by Anonymous04/27/08

ok

it was ok until near the end you revealed that they were sisters and not brother and sister would have been better in the lesbian area not incest

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by Anonymous12/03/08

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Awsome, its really hard to write in 1st person I loved this story and its conclusion was EARTH SHATTERING! I write as Happyday in Literotica and I thought this was one of the best I've ever read.

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