All Comments on 'Her Cherry'

I was willing to give you the benefit of the doubt, since you make it clear that the story is from a 18 year old guys perspecitive, but it simply reads like a 14 year old frustrated virgin wrote it.

This is the fantasy of a misognystic teenage - nothing erotic about it at all

No girl deserves to have her virginity taken roughly no matter what the man thinks she did to to him or his friends!! She doesn't deserve to be hurt with sex! This is the act of a rapist!! She doesn't deserve to have those tapes all over either. Some girls want to have a lover for a First Time. Most teenage boys don't even know what that word means. This kid should be in prison finding out what "hard sex" is all about!

"She's my best friend's cousin's sister."

um, the sister would also be his best friend's cousin.

I am sorry, your writing is terrible! The beginning is great, but the sex was way to rough for a virgin!

Great

U r sick

Edward has illogical reasoning he simply calls her a bitch for not giving him the attention he egoistically thinks he and his friends deserve. She's the bitch when she politely rejected guys that were betting on her virginity.

"Even with Martin and Ryan flirting with her, it seems that she knows what they are thinking and easily rejected them in her most polite way. Even though they were competing, Edward was angry that Michelle would be such an arrogant bitch to his friends."

This story has a typical incel mindset:

Women was polite and nice to a man, but didn't let him fuck her. Man gets irrationally angry. What a load of bullshit!

Women owe you nothing man, especially just because you are a nice guy. Please grow up.

Disgusting rape story and your grammar stinks.