carry on living dead..and don't stop fucking..ahahahaha!!!
What i got from this fine writing is that she is very selfish and quite dillusional about her actions being for both her and her husbad, if she truly wanted to spice up life George shpuld have been in on the spice trips too. George loved her with al his heart and passion, therefore when betrayed with a knife to his heart he reacted with passion... Thats what real men do, we react with passion, we don't share ... That's a european thing.
You do a remarkable job writing this story. You story, how you tell it, and passion in it is very clear. Even more remarkable is that English is not your native language. I hope you write more, although some of your stories make me very uncomfortable.
But I still see this author as little more than a succubus.
Please, remove your photo. Please?
the slut wife wins
To judge moral caracter. As I have none, I love sluts. Big old good ones and good old big ones. But you have talent. Don't waste it. Write us something that don't make me want to load my gun!!!
8 chapters of pure garbage about a whore who stays a whore and a cuck who will always be a cuck.
8 chapters of pure genius about a woman who stays a woman and a man who will always be a man.
and one that could/should have been combined with 7 - making it two simply drew the story out unnecessarily. Ultimately, it was disappointing, despite the good writing and excellent use of vocabulary, because the characters didn't really come to life in any believable sense. In simple terms, the lack of humour and simple humanity in the telling undermined what ought to have been a very good series.
a fitting final insult to the man she betrayed and made a cuckold. A people wonder why men kill their wives.
Whore. Cunt. Slut. Skank. What revenge? He killed himself. She lives? And is pregnant? Like she deserves to pass her genes onto another person? I hope she dies in childbirth. In pain. MUCH pain. Fucking cunt.
Let George Do It, is overstated in this case, TK U MLJ LV NV
Sure Ann's a libertine, the crime is that some have an open marriage, and that was why she needed, or marry someone who agreed to be monigimish.
Good characterization, original plot, well written. Excellent!
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