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Eater of Sin

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by LeBroz08/29/07

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.


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by UnderYourSpell08/29/07

Wow

and just wow again this is fabulous writing sorry I am not brainy enough to say why it hits all the right notes I just know it does for me.

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by ghost_girl08/29/07

damn, Dr M

I can't see what you were worried about ,this is fantastic!

I love the way you alternate the lines and rhyme, with words that are not all used up and cliche. I love the story you have told and the rhythm you gave this piece. and the repitition is not forced and very appropriate in this work. That is a difficult thing to do, but it works.

excellent music, for someone who misplaced his muse

enjoyed much-

julie

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by Anonymous08/31/07

Lovely

I'm impressed at how you're able to convey such emotion in so few but perfect words.

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by shereads08/31/07

An erotic moment suspended in amber

Lovely, erotic, glowing from within.

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by Anonymous09/10/07

Sin Eater

Unlike some of your other poems, this one has a fluid gracefulness that seems like it was effortless to write.I know better. Although EATER OF SIN has alot of action, it seems more thoughtful and reflective on your part. The dichotomy of words and ideas kept me going back and forth about who was really the eater of sin, who brought atonement to whom, was this a beautiful process (I looked up the word rictus!)did one have to get dirty in order to purify....etc. Leighlilly

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by Anonymous01/16/08

once again...

absolute perfection. thank you...

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by shereads08/05/09

I'm famished.

Perfect.

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by Anonymous12/11/11

Eater of sin

Perfect! I'm not usually one for poems, I loved this one. A

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