All Comments on 'Vampire Not So Cold'

by tissuegirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WELL???

I LIKED UR STORY BUT--A LITTLE CONFUSING AT THE END..U SHOULD HAVE SAID A LITTLE MORE,,GOOD SEX SCENE BUT NO BITE R ANYTHING TO LET THE VAMPIRE CHARACTER SEEM REAL R WAS ORAL SEX THE REQUIRED NOURISHMENT INSTEAD OF BLOOD..ANYWAY U COULD DO WITH A PART 2..I THINK OTHERS AND I WOULD ENJOY HEARING MORE ABOUT THIS STORY..THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wow

Some big typos that kind of take away from the flow of the story. Other than that, it was pretty good. I definetly enjoyed it. Sweet ending, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
nice

i loved it

aryelofthenightaryelofthenightabout 15 years ago
wanted more

Very interesting story. Could have gone on a little longer for me gave more plot.

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