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by DemoonKatjie

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Blitzwing23Blitzwing23over 16 years ago
Oregonians

You are a very good writer. I enjoyed your peice. What I would like to address however, is a place that makes the headwaters of the willamette look like a mud puddle. Check out the Green Peter area. The beauty is breathtaking. It's just east of Sweethome, on hwy 20.

Fellow oregonian,

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XXNoraJeanXXXXNoraJeanXXover 16 years ago
Very nice

This was very well written. I like the images that your captured and created with words. I think I will have to seek out some of your other stories. :) Thx!

perl10perl10over 16 years ago
Nice Place

Don't we all need a place like that? Don't you feel sorry for those that don't? Or even worse, wouldn't appreciate it if they did?

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