All Comments on 'Chasing Time'

by chargergirl

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MusedMusedover 16 years ago
Sad and beautiful

I felt your hapiness and I felt your pain. I had a friend who became entangled with drugs. Thankfully, he escaped before it was too late. I think I'll write to him. Thank you, Chargergirl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
So sorry for your loss...

The true evil of drug dealers is apparent when good people lose their lives because of an addiction to dangerous drugs. I hope the writing of this poem has brought healing to you as well as others who have lost loved ones.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Absolutely wrenching . . .

. . . but a beautiful expression of a loving relationship. . . a relationship cut too short.

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterabout 15 years ago
Beautiful poem

An eloquent testament to a life's love. Well done.

Fx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
heartfelt

I feel the similarly for my ex-wife. We were best friends until a year ago when she started interacting with some old druggie friends. She even put our son second to her friends. I miss who she used to be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
poet laur e ate

I read your poetry sounds like a sad life for you

hope it is only poetry nothing to do with family tree

still nice rhymes for the times

now off to read stories y Charger girl

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

very good

muffins92muffins9211 months ago

I really like it. Very sad poem.

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