All Comments on 'Tio Juan and Marissa'

Awesome story..very hot..I loved the imagery..awesome story

Just exactly what is this girl's name? For most of the piece you called her Marissa, but in a couple places her name was Raquel. It really doesn't matter I guess, but it is confusing when suddenly a different name shows up. Perhaps a little bit more proofreading would help.

Love the story, the way Tio Juan is teaching hot sex to Marissa, but over all, me encanta the way you mix the Espanglish, mi'jita, keep on escribiendo,mmmmm

this story is such a turn on. i feel so horny,if my neice visits today i may very well rip her panties off and give it to her.

Too bad he did not take her luscious bubble butt, that would have brought the sperm out...may be in part two.

Well this story give me idea that how i'l take my nices virgen pussy.

Normally, I'm not a stickler for spelling, grammar, nor any known types of acceptable written formats for stories of this nature or otherwise. However, I couldn't help but notice the main character Raquel or Marissa, is depicted as same young adult in this story. In my world, it's helpful to know such relevant information. Can't hard to believe this one got past editors and/or representatives of this site for 10 or more years. Just a thought.

This was hot af but double check the names

More please