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All Comments on 'Sex in a Stream'

by Hibbidyhai

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Decent idea, poor writing

The scenario was not quite believable, but it was acceptable. The prose was stilted, the punctuation (or lack of it) occasionally had me re-reading a few sentences, and then she sat on his "lamp"? Need to get with an editor.

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