All Comments on 'Fallen'

mina sis! *hugs* fantastic story..congratulations *cheers you on..wondering what will be next* thank you for the wild ride! was awesome!...love, fire~

i adore your story, i can't wait for you to write more - greedy little slut that i am! *blush i adore the way your mind works and the way you put it all out there so brazen, so tender, so hot, so courageous. xox, ~femmegyrl

"We tend to think of the erotic as an easy, tantalizing sexual arousal. I speak of the erotic as the deepest life force, a force which moves us toward living in a fundamental way."

Point taken....fantastic story

This was very good ... makes me want to take a walk in the woods with Sir. i think i'll share it with Him. *smiles*

will there be more?

A very nice short story... I like a quick read every once in a while, and this certainly fit the bill.