That was a beautiful story. I can only wish that, unlike "not", I could have not only been there to witness but also to help out when you were finished.
Excellent writing Sir.
My advice inform the readers by always putting: 'Chapter one' next to the title of the story. It kind of puts every thing in the right context... The good quality of writing is still here, together with the tendency to write overly short mini chapters. Is anyone chasing you? You know you can do better.
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not
I would not have fucked her with my worst enemy's dick much less take her back. What a jerk.
Would...
That was a beautiful story. I can only wish that, unlike "not", I could have not only been there to witness but also to help out when you were finished.
Excellent writing Sir.
Nesher
The magic hands are a bit too quick...
My advice inform the readers by always putting: 'Chapter one' next to the title of the story. It kind of puts every thing in the right context... The good quality of writing is still here, together with the tendency to write overly short mini chapters. Is anyone chasing you? You know you can do better.
CHEATER AND LEAVERS
return after the beaters. TK U MLJ LV NV
What?
Geez. Another ch. coming up?
WHY?
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