All Comments on 'A Threeway with Elves'

by Hibbidyhai

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HendrixieaHendrixieaover 16 years ago
Second Chapter Please

There has to be a second chapter on the way? The idea was great. In the next chapter you should take the idea the other way. If it is illegal for elves to get pregnant before marriage then there have to be plenty of very horny male elves out there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

or just stop writing completely

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Edit please

Interesting idea, but because it is so poorly written, it is unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Not bad at all. Quite well written though I find the presence of jeans in a fantasy world to be somewhat anachronistic given that most fantasy worlds are medieval in style

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