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roticwizardroticwizardover 16 years ago
amazing!

perfect in many ways. Sequal, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW

That was perfect in so many ways. The pussy on pussy, the brother/sister, the knowledge that they shouldn't do it but can't help themselves....

PLEASE write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Steamy

This almost should be Mind Control. Gina is definitely in control of two very happy sibling. Hope youo send us another story soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
far - out!

that was sensational... it's been a long time since i read such a well-paced story, good lead-up and pay-off, clean and simple characterisation. and of course, the story is hot hot hot...

sibling incest can be hard to put into a realistic context and this story worked for me. parent-teenager incest stories are fairly common and formulaic, sibling incest usually comes down to "older sibling comes home from college and teaches younger sibling some new tricks". this story isn't original (there aren't that many originaly stories anyway, really) but it's an AWESOME riff on a reliable tune and i'm keenly - KEENLY - interested to see where you_horny_biotch goes from here.

add one more fan to the list!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Damn...never had a sister treat me like that...!

Loved it...keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot!

Very hot story. I really loved it.

n2anal78n2anal78over 16 years ago
HOT

Simply put...

One of the hottest stories I've read in quite a long time. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Brilliant! Brilliant!

Great story.

If im picking i would have liked a bit more build up but apart from that one of the best I have read for a while.

I liked how you did not desribe the characters too much which allowed my own imagination to run wild.

Paul_GPaul_Gover 16 years ago
EXCELLENT

Write more please a Part II brother takes sis with Gina. Nice writing good job mmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
AWESOME

Da capo, please!

Dirty_Old_Man3Dirty_Old_Man3over 16 years ago
Great Job!

Please continue this story! It was wonderfully done and very descriptive! Very easy to imagine the action as you described it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
best story in awhile here

keep it going

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Wonderful vivid fantasy!

I really enjoyed this! This is aan extremly exciting story! Keep up the great work!

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 16 years ago
Wonderful vivid fantasy!

I really enjoyed this! This is aan extremly exciting story! Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
damn

That was so freakin hot, one of the best things that I've read in a long time. It may have been short but is sure as hell was sweet... all the different positions, the buildups to the climaxes, describing the threesome, the girl on girl/pussy on pussy, MY GOD.

Sequel PLEASE!

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Great

Don't normally like incest stories but this was hot and sexy.

iloveladygagailoveladygagaover 14 years ago
Fuck

That was sexy. made me so very wet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
fuckin hottt

luved it! ilove stories where siblings are 1st introduced to incest in such a hot way! gina is my hero!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent...

Great story! Well written - few typos and grammar which should have been spell-checked - but exceptionally good otherwise.

Don't need a sequel - I've already imagined and enjoyed about 10 of them - WELL DONE!!

nflgirl81nflgirl81over 11 years ago
Hot!

That was so very hot. I'll admit it definitely had an effect on me. More please.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 10 years ago
Spot on bump & grind description !

The actual seduction & aftermath was perfunctory, but it it seems no one cares. What the author chose to cover was done superbly.but to me, there's tangible room for improvement.

rbloch66rbloch666 months ago

That was seriously hot!

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