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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Heart Warming

Nice to read something that appeals to my real world side about "real" people.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 16 years ago
Very sweet

and romantic. A pleasure to read, even though there are a lot of small boo-boo's.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Sweet indeed!

For once I see a benefit in having English as a second language - namely, not being disrupted by language road bumps which others have noticed...

CAP811CAP811over 16 years ago
a fantasy for sure

Needs to work on his dialogue.

Baba8Baba8over 16 years ago
nice journey

nice journey and movement in story. dialogue work to establish a voice for each character in the story would improve the read. they all seem to have the same voice.

a few type-0's i noticed--know-- to-- known. hoe--to-- how. and--to--an.

noticed that all your characters were bigger then life except Mom.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
'bout time

It's about time the nerd got the girl, they are just as human as any macho muscleheaded jock, adonus or spoiled rich member of the poison ivy league. Let's hear it for the underdog?!!!!!

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
WOW!!

If it was only this easy good read great fairy tale. Thanks for sharing. I like your style.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Super

As a guy who hates sports and jocks this is most enjoyable

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