All Comments on 'New Neighbors'

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SKIP69SKIP69over 16 years ago
Nice

Romance is the right category for this story. Softly, gentle, no roughness and so easily flowing.

bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
Nice story

I agree with first reader i hope you continue with the story it`s well written .

Pat

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Need more

You need to get more into the sex, spice it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Proof read

Spelling, context and grammar. Have that, and you can write anything.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
great story

One of the best I've read in a long time! Great!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
great

Why can't more authors write stories like this one? Just perfect. No ego, not trying to pretend this is Hemingway or even Harold Robbins, just a good stroke story and easy to follow narrative.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

That would be heaven for sure...having both mother and daughter....and them sharing each other....totally HOT

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