by Isopropyl
Romance is the right category for this story. Softly, gentle, no roughness and so easily flowing.
I agree with first reader i hope you continue with the story it`s well written .
Pat
Spelling, context and grammar. Have that, and you can write anything.
Why can't more authors write stories like this one? Just perfect. No ego, not trying to pretend this is Hemingway or even Harold Robbins, just a good stroke story and easy to follow narrative.
That would be heaven for sure...having both mother and daughter....and them sharing each other....totally HOT