All Comments on 'Your Dream Girl'

This is a hot, well-written story. I like the fact it is written in the present tense, which bring immediacy to it. Keep writing.

How come Elvis has all the fun? Wish I was him as I’m sure a lot of other guys do too!!

This was a great story!

-M

I feel I know you in this story you are my dream girl cause this is exactly the way she would make love to me.