All Comments on 'One Sexy Night'

We needed to get away and my husband booked a room at a nice hotel downtown just the perfect thing to break up the monotint of life.

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"monotint" should be spelled "monotony."

You could not even write your opening sentence without making a mistake. I will not bother with the rest.

Your grammar and spelling sucks, the story is good though, but again, with a little thought and care it could have been really good..

I thought everyone knew how to spell Champagne.

Pace is uneven. Some aspects are glossed over (which should not have been) and others (which didn't need much detail) take inordinate space. Weak on why Hubby might have gone along with this. Also ignores why Sweetie didn't send Hubby 'hungry & horny' signals after 10-15 minutes at the bar!

@Trouvere - 'monotint' is a constructed (made-up by author) word which roughly equates to 'colorless' (and, more prosaically,) to 'monotony!

Agree with 'champagne!' ALSO, a word capitalized when it refers to French province but NOT when it is a fizzy wine!

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