All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Open Family'

Agree with other person,not many group incest srories work,except a family foursome.dad daughter ,mom son

"setting out cloths on the couch" Don't you mean "our clothes".

Proof reading does wonders

In your next chapter, describe who impregnates each woman.

Good first story, it could be drawn out a bit and some of the action towards the end was a bit hard to follow and it appeared that each guy came 5 or 6 times in one afternoon which is a bit hard to accept. Nonetheless, this is a good story and I look forward to seeing it continued.

intersting beginning...but...this scenerio works the best with mom/dad/son/daughter..dialogue was too bland...not sexy enough...hopefully in next chapter..what could make this family really open up...would be inclusion of some hottt bi activity..both male/female..

Pretty good,actually.Just wanted to say to Anonymous U.S.A. that I've purchased new novels by reputable publishers that contained editorial errors.Give it a rest and enjoy the story for what it's purpose is,to tempt our minds and libidos.

For the critics, this is a work of erotic fiction, like in fantasy. In fiction or fantasy there are no complications, only fun and pleasure. Accept this story for what it is and let me stroke it a few.

Good story, I liked it

I think that the story was great but didnt take enough time to introduce and know the characters - just naming them is not really enough - the activities should have introduced over a series - thus making it more interesting -but keep up the good work and let us know what happens next in these households

I'm anxious to see who gets pregnant by whom....There is no mention of birth control...

It was just OK

Really nice.

Kind of sounds like my family. We are a family of eight. And we share the love too.

This is very nice,I have had a similar experience with my mother in law. My wife comes from a family of nudist swingers to have sex in front of other people is a common event also we are all into bi sex I have had sex with all in the family and it is good to be funked by my wife's mum and have a cock in my arse from her dad or brother

Remember coming out of the shower when i saw my girl friend and her mom naked together doing 69 position.her mom was lying on top of her daughter and had her head licking her daughters cunt like my girl friend.so i got on top of her mom shoved my cock in here moms cunt and stuck it up till i bottomed out in her.started fucking her bareback made her cum.then pulled out shoved up in my girl friends cunt pushed hard into her.i fucked her good then unloaded in my girl friends cunt.told my girl friend sit on your moms face let her lick that cum out of your cunt.i fucked them one more time.they both end up being pregnant and her mom told me you should worn condom and i said i only do bareback.so now us 3 sleep together in one bed and have 3 way sex.

i wish it was longer with more character development, but i nice sexy read

Pretty erotic, but a little short. Wish it had been longer.

To coin a phrase, you can't beat that with a stick and a shovel.

I never found a girlfriend with a family like that...but I'm still looking !