All Comments on 'Raspberry Beret Remix'

by rengadeirishman

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glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
Oooh! I get to be your first!

A nice little read, Irish! Halloween isn't always scary. I'll be humming that song all night.

TE999TE999over 16 years ago
Well done Ren!

A clever and believable Halloween tale. You have a flair for conversational dialogue. Good luck in the contest.

ultimate_nerdslutultimate_nerdslutover 16 years ago
Loved the song loved your story!

I really like it Ren, I'm going to take some of what I read and apply it to my own writing style. Great job!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 16 years ago
It was

pretty good. I did like some of the dialogue, but it seemed a bit over the top.

littlecyclonelittlecycloneover 16 years ago
Good work

I liked it. A very cute well done story.

SweetWitchSweetWitchover 16 years ago
Fun

This brought back memories of my single days. Loads of fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
not baad

ok you had an informal mood, clearly the mood of a nice one night stand.

i gather you hint no further endeavours, ah well that is Okay.

thank you for those paragraphs

WolfsisterWolfsisterover 16 years ago
Loved it

I loved it Ren. More of your classic style. Fantastic

damppantiesdamppantiesover 16 years ago
Short and sweet

A good first story. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just okay

This year the quality of stories for Halloween has been exceptional. Most of the authors have created amazing stories - some quite scary and creepy, others sentimental, romantic and tender, so regretfully in comparison this one is just okay. Thank you for the read.

michchick98michchick98over 16 years ago
Nice Story

I liked how you threw lyrics to the song in here and there. One of my favorite Prince tunes and brings back lots of memories! Well done! Good luck in the contest!

olive424olive424over 16 years ago
Good Story

I thought your story was great. I enjoyed your personal touch. You are a good writer, friend. Keep doing it.

Olive

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesover 16 years ago
Sweet

Well written. Good luck in the contest.

DarkniciadDarkniciadover 16 years ago
Excellent take

Love how you've brought the song out in the story, but I suppose you know that I get a kick out of that already *laugh* Good luck in the contest!

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