by rengadeirishman
A nice little read, Irish! Halloween isn't always scary. I'll be humming that song all night.
A clever and believable Halloween tale. You have a flair for conversational dialogue. Good luck in the contest.
I really like it Ren, I'm going to take some of what I read and apply it to my own writing style. Great job!
pretty good. I did like some of the dialogue, but it seemed a bit over the top.
ok you had an informal mood, clearly the mood of a nice one night stand.
i gather you hint no further endeavours, ah well that is Okay.
thank you for those paragraphs
This year the quality of stories for Halloween has been exceptional. Most of the authors have created amazing stories - some quite scary and creepy, others sentimental, romantic and tender, so regretfully in comparison this one is just okay. Thank you for the read.
I liked how you threw lyrics to the song in here and there. One of my favorite Prince tunes and brings back lots of memories! Well done! Good luck in the contest!
I thought your story was great. I enjoyed your personal touch. You are a good writer, friend. Keep doing it.
Olive
Love how you've brought the song out in the story, but I suppose you know that I get a kick out of that already *laugh* Good luck in the contest!