by Feral_Intelligence
I loved this story immensely; the interaction between the two lovers was especially sensual and highly erotic. Moreover, I adored the specifics the author supplied in describing the young Korean girl. I am a white male who has always considered Asian females to be particularly cute and pretty, and the author did an excellent job of highlighting this tremendous beauty of which they are in possession.
Lots of heat, good feel for the heroine's excitement. More please.
Tremendously hot! Super erotic stuff...please give us more stories!
I hope the writer continues with the character and develops her more...
This has to be one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. I couldn't keep my hand off my pussy as I read about the hard fucking the girl got. It was so discriptive, it was like I was there.
That was an amazing story. I loved how the author discribed the girl slowly submiting to her urges. I'd love to find a guy that could break me down like that then give me such a powerful orgasm.
OMG...I loved it, and I hope we get to read about more of her adventures!
That was so hot! I really enjoyed you have quite a talent, had to read it again while stroking, please write some more!!
The interplay between the 2 parts of the nature,
And its reflections in the actions and interactions
Is handled exquisitely...
Hot and sweet!
It started off a little too A-typical for me but then became much more interesting. It would've been better if it weren't for the grammatical mistakes and misspellings, but that can easily be remedied with a good editor. Very hot story line, though.
He knew her mind better than she new herself.
SHOULD BE
He knew her mind better than she Knew herself.
Lame and stupid attempt. As a previous commenter said Mai isn’t a Korean name, also it’s very hard to pull anyone’s panties down once they have a spreader bar attached. A waste of time reading it.