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champagne1982champagne1982over 16 years ago
good

one line bothers me. "My mouth opens to receive his" leaves me wondering what exactly he's putting in your mouth. Ambiguity is good sometimes but I think, in this case I am left with the idea that you're eating his mouth. Careful! LOL. Thanks for sharing.

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I read, write, sing and draw. I believe that there is more to sexuality than just the blunt points of tab a inserting into tab b. The most erotic stories, and personal experiences happen and come to life when both the physical and the mental aspects are combined. i hope y...