All Comments on 'Holly Watches Ch. 02'

by MungoParkIII

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NDoradoNDoradoover 16 years ago
Not bad

I'm looking forward to more chapters and seeing where this story goes. You have me intrigued! Keep up the good work.

Jena121Jena121over 16 years ago
Good start

A good start - hope there are a few more chapters to go - then maybe - the sister's girlfriend and her brother can get involved too - keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Someone forgot to hang up his jacket downstairs, wups! ....and that dude must have had a mission if he had stripped off that fast after getting into his room, lol!

Kinda nice seeing the story from the girls perspective for a change, hehehe ;)

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