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Ravishingabout 15 years agoOooo
You nailed it. The background info, the characters, the scene .. and the style you wrote into it. Loved it.
~ R
Anonymousover 14 years agomeh. . .
Could have been better. . . it was kinda lacking that Wow factor. Keep trying though =)
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoAnother unfinished story writer strikes again.
Only 1-STAR for an unfinished story Retired Army NCO
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