This is wonderful and sad and beautiful. Such a gift you have. Please write more.
heartbreaking, and deeply felt, just as I'd expect. Please write more, you truly are an excellent writer.
I really like this. You have an expansive talent. Beautifully written.
I read a post on the blurt or Dear X thread and couldn't help thinking of that when I read your poem.
The pain comes out harsh and clear as if you were spitting blood. It's painful to read. Yet, the heart goes out, and the lyrical expression so raw, but one can't avert one's eyes. It could not be easy to wear one's heart on one's sleeve like that. As for the talent, that's between the very generous creator of you and you...
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