The really great thing about your stories is that I am so often surprised by the twists and turns. I couldn't figure out how Elfgwvyns (sp?) twin was going to fit into this story -- was he there to cause trouble between Hannah/Anni and her new husband, as temptation? But the plot twist makes sense. Identical twins are one egg, divided in half.
Another great update!
I love this story as it begins to make sense of how she and the 2 Fey brothers will come together. It is a pleasure to read as is all your stories.
I love lusty elves. this chapter felt a little rushed though... not as much attention to detail/plot/character development as the previous ones.
This is undoubtedly my favorite story that you have written. I was afraid that you might have decided to quit writing this one... Thank you so much for another wonderful addition to your collection, it was amazing.
Loveing the story, will be hoping for more!!
The last three chapters were intriguing to say the least. I would have never imagined to new twist to this story. I love the uniqueness of it..
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