All Comments on 'What A Girl Wants'

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fantasy123fantasy123over 16 years ago
Exquisitely tender

I must confess I'm somewhat mystified as to why this piece doesn't have a 4.5 average and thought I should do my bit. We sometimes forget that erotica is not merely about squirming bodies and flailing limbs, the mechanics of sex. It is also about hearts that beat just that little faster, about minds that slowly turn into mush at the unbearable tenderness of the act of love. Your piece helps to remind us all.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
What a girl wants is also what a guy wants

Nice imagery. Your short letter sums it all up in a very erotic way. Thanks.

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