All Comments on 'My Father, My Husband'

Please continue. Write more such stories. Your stories are

fantastic besides being erotic.

It is obvious that English is a foreign language to you. Please get an editor before submitting any more stories. It is just too hard to read this terrible grammar you have thrust upon us.<P>

Below are just a few examples of really bad grammar it makes you stop to try and understand what the writer is trying to say.<P>

"How was the day, Latha?" he enquired me.<P>

We reached our home and I moved inside with him following me behind.<P>

I clung tightly to him which I am used to quite often.<P>Get an editor and try again.<P>Good Luck<P>PT

Please write some o brother & sister incest. Lovely story

Yes the english is not perfect, however the sheer raw sexuality....

This is one of literotica's best.

unreadable due to your inability to form a complete sentance.

Awesome story... Is it real????:)

How did Latha become Lakshmi

Latha, daughter here is a very good to look after her dad there is no harm or sin as she is willing ready and enjoying and her father is also happy to fulfill his passion with his dearest one. Love sex in a right way is the happiness of two lovers. All over the world loving sex in own dear ones, among father,mother, sister brother close ones is very healthy so long it is at a right age mutual and enjoyable as incest is very common and have been from the very start of creation and is continuing all the time in the past to now these days it is going to be legal like homo marriages.

Hi, first of all I want to say not to worry about your English. I could understand everything. I do understand that English may not be your first language but that gave it more authenticity.

I loved the story, it was erotic, very erotic. Having had sex with my father, I know how wonderful and sexy it is. The other thing I like is older Indian men. The combination was great.

Going to read some more of your stories.

Lizzy

Very well written, it is apparent English isn't your first language but as stated it was written well and very understandable.

My mom died very young, just at 32 years age. I was only 14 then. After mom;s death me and dad alone at home. Though I am 14, I look like a grown up girl of 17/18 years. Within a month of mom's death we became very close and I share dad;s bed. I performed my mom's role. Dad enjoyed me like her wife for 6 years till my marriage. Really I am more comfortable with my dad on bed than my husband..

It was pretty good and enjoyable to read, though the whole tearing of her virginity was wrong... If he was pushing his fingers in and out of her then her hymen was already gone, or she never had one. Other than that the story was great, thanks!

Pictorial representation of this story please

Boom boom boom FBI open up

Hot and sweet story. Thank you.

I gave the story a 4.

As a man I would have like to pdcpr the daughter get pregnant with her father's baby.