by foxy5
Mmmmmmmmmm, you let your imagination run wild ... but then it's fantasy. This idea of the beautful girl being raped/seduced by a dirty old man, kinda like Beauty and the Beast ... anyway, I liked it!!
Absolutely loved this story, my favourite subject, pretty girl raped by nasty smelly old men. please please write a follow up. Would love to hear about her getting raped by tramps and down and outs......
Grotesque not erotic at all. I realize the site is about sexual fantasies but I find it sad that anyone could even get off on this. All of us are someone's child. All I could imagine was a parent having to witness this or even hear about it. A little too depressing for my taste. - You write well though Foxy5
What do you expect reading nonconsensual stories?
Really love the down n dirty stuff and appreciate your imagination.
Wow
I knew a quarter of the way down the page it was clicking my buttons and by 2/3rds I was done ;-)
Saving the rest for next time - thanks for a brill read - exactly what I was looking for x x x
ho damn thats some good shat lovved it to hell made me horny like ae foolilafgl
ho damn thats some good shat lovved it to hell made me horny like ae foolilafgl
1st time commenting- your story turned me on like crazy- just simple- dirty
I don't kow if you care about your target audience or whatever, but I'm SWF 25, live in SF
Thanks for all the feedback. I'll be writing more soon. Maybe you could write and tell me what you'd like me to write about. Would really appreciate more feedback. Remember, this is fantasy and non consent fantasy, not real life. Thanks! Foxy xxx
GREAT STORY! I, too, was done at 2/3...and am looking forward to reading the rest. You sure do know how to write erotica. Well done!
really hope this story is just invented...but it was damn good one!
I've always been the most attracted to filthy, disgusting men such as the ones in this story. I'm looking forward to the next one...if there will be one. I think there should be, about her times with horny nasty men using her.
Fab story and not too violent. Would love to finger your sloppy holes afterwards and snog you. In London too.....
Very perverse,loved every min of it.
Especially "The whole car smells of my pussy" part....that little line got me so fucking horny you have no idea! 5stars