All Comments on 'Edgar Allan's Ho's "The Cravin'"'

I know this poem has been around for some weeks, but I've only just read it. It's a bit "lumpy" in terms of the rhythm, but it is a very nice imitation of Poe's style in The Raven with a neat interplay between 'ever more' and 'never more'.

I'd be interested in reading more of your verse, and will keep a lookout for it on Literotica.

Thanks to you, and all those writers who give us less talented mortals so much pleasure and entertainment.

Freddy

Great tongue-in-cheek treatment, gave it a 5.

A possible suggestion for the fifth stanza: change "so secure" to "wants to soar".

And I thought "Abory, Retry, Ignore" was cool.