All Comments on 'Kiss the Bride'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wonderful

great first story..i would love to read anything else you may write..you could even expand this one..please do write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
love your stories

they are great, but I wish they were longer. would love to see more of Thad and paige! That was hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
more

Great work but needs to be longer or sequels to all you stories

PurringPearlPurringPearlover 10 years ago
ok

not really believable for a first time...to much extra for a first time...it would either be more forceful or gentle and more time and detail.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 10 years ago

You never mentioned where or when he took his own clothes off. That makes the scene more difficult to visualize.

MadamCrowMadamCrowalmost 7 years ago

That was amazing! Thank you!!

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