All Comments on 'Virgin Sister and Cousin'
by Urguycliff
- 15 Comments
Anonymousover 16 years agoEither that or get an editor...changing tenses willy-nilly, bad grammar, him, her, me, I or all at once...geez, the mind spins with all the misuses. The difficulty in deciphering the grammar took away any value in the story.
Anonymousover 16 years agoUse Google to help you with basic physiology… 'I slide more of me into you, till I feel the barrier.' The barrier is at the entrance.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThe person before me commenting is such a fucking virgin. It I'm a woman and I know damn well the barrier wasn't at the entrance. It's inside a woman's pussy a bit. It's not just right at the beginning. Anonymous virgin, wait till you have sex to be giving advice on it. mmk?
Anonymousover 16 years agoWhat the hell are you people looking for? So Cliff is no Hemingway.
All he does is write a very hot erotic story which is what I am looking for. So congratulations Cliff and keep it up.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoMany sources, including romance novels and other materials that describe virginity loss, mistakenly indicate that the hymen is somewhere up inside the vagina. This is a common misconception. The hymen is part of the external genitalia.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoHe doesn't have to be Hemmingway, but if it doesn't flow better than 7th grade english, then it detracts from the sexual excitement when you have to translate as you go.
Anonymousover 14 years agoStory is good but there is some grammatical mistakes which takes away hard works of Mr. Cliff from him. At the end. . . . It was a good one.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThe story itself was pretty good, but the strange narration technique of the guy describing to the girl what she was feeling... It was very distracting.
Anonymousabout 14 years agowhat a waste of time this should have been in the nonconsent area also a virgin that was forced like that would probably not be able to walk much less be on top what an idiot only a loser would write or enjoy such trash
Anonymousover 5 years agoI don't find rape entertaining or erotic. It's not a joke, and it's not "just a normal part of life." I can't believe the sister could just watch a rape and not interfere. I guess the cousin could help him rape his sister, after what she'd just been through. But it's too twisted to be worth reading.
Marsiliusabout 5 years agoWould have loved more detail about deflowering the girls not just an incestuous rape scene
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