All Comments on 'A Monthly Affair'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
About As Interesting As A Migraine Headache

Fact #1. When someone can't tell a story with enough intensity to make a connection with the reader, there's no point in writing. Fact #2: This "writer" can't tell a story. Enough said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Cute

I liked the theme and over all writ, would have enjoyed a little more passion in there sex. DuPain

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
this was about as sexy as a fart

she's a whore and the writer is a moron

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Sucks

Utter garbage.

Why do people cheat?

texcavemantexcavemanabout 11 years ago
how interesting.....

I do believe the other commentors missed what was happening.

he was not cheating! he and his wife were fatasizing and his wife was the one acting out as his whore.

THE LAST LINE READS:

There are not many marriages where wife and whore live contentedly side by side.

read closer folks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very interesting

A surprise ending but also satisfying. Good story.

imhaplessimhaplessover 5 years ago
Interesting

and off-beat; I like interesting and offbeat.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Took a minute

Took me a minute, but I finally got it. Good story.

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