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twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
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I'm sorry no one commented on this. This looks like a sonnet, they are a bear to do. Some of the lines look a little much, some of the lines look forced. Best of luck, but don't try to write the killer poem, because trying often kills the poem.

sensualquillssensualquillsover 16 years ago
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I think it's fantastic!! going to submit one of mine now. adding this to my favs. sincerely, SQ

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