All Comments on 'Zanna's Touch, Tyler's Lust'

by crazycase

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bear2readbear2readover 16 years ago
A Good Start

I liked the start to this story and hope that there is more to come. Seems to me like there's a long history with the two and that it would be nice to bring that out in the next chapter or two. I like the fact that you've got 2 strong personalities, yet no serious relationship commitment yet. I think you've got several ways to take this story. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW

This is exactly my story. I am the guy and I cannot commit to this one girl but she is the closest to me understands me and everything. We are always there for each other when we need a release. She also wants to stop but I am always excellent at seducing her.

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