All Comments on 'Pool of the Undine'

very interesting story with a nice twist to it . . the only thing that made it less enjoyable was all the (I assume) British slang . . it made it very difficult to understand in parts

You have a really creepy imagination. I like that! Twerp deserved just what he got.

It was a well written story. As was you Venus--Redlights story.

This guy had "I'm the doomed fall guy" written all over his forehead. It was clear that the end was near when he mocked the incredibly specific warning on the sign. Liked his reaction to walking on water.

Wonderful description of a lout to a dried up lout...lol. Thank you for your writing. L