All Comments on 'Bunnygirl Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
YAY ur back....

...now where's the sex???

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
YAY ur back....

...now where's the sex??

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
it's not rape if it isn't fully human!

...the wonderful kidnapper is such a gentleman worthy of a girl's love: slaver, threatening and manipulating, he is obviously going to violate her soon enough as soon as he finishes brainwashing her into enjoying his sadistic games. <p> What will happen after? Can't be a romance, raped girls don't fall in love with scum who deserve to be tortured to death... perhaps an erotic horror? Once he has finished tossing her around, and wore her out pimping her body for more than an eyeful to the crowds, perhaps she could be cut up for a rabbit fricassee! lol <p> Interesting stories, nonetheless... =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good i guess

Pick up the pace a bit.

puffin09puffin09over 16 years ago
nice job

its a good story...i really would like to see a return to Zachery and Annabelle, read more of their lives together raising Harley

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This reminds me of Angela Carter--

and that's a compliment

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