All Comments on 'Prom Night Twist'

You don't have to be a beauty queen to get overwhelmed with passion.

BUT THEN SO AM I,HOW DO YOU DO.

That is the way she should be--Mom with loads of hair down there. How erotic!

What a demented piece of crap story! Your need to describe repulsive details is indicative of your sick state of being. GET HELP!

keep your day job.

Mixed with just a dash of possible fetish. I can't tell by the '0' comments what exactly about this story they find so horrible. As far as the writing style, it was good. Some of the posted stories on here are full of grammatical errors, misspelled and mis-used words, and completely banal plots. This one, thankfully, is not.<br><br>

If you don't like incest stories, don't read any of them. If you were turned off by the hairy pussy, get over yourself. Not every pussy is shaved smooth as a baby's butt. <br><br>

I'm guessing it was the little bit of urine involved that is freaking everyone out. Again, calm down. That particular moment in the story was just that, a moment in the whole spectrum. Thought you did a fine job pantysniffer.

More, more, love it.

Best description for this is "self abusers aid",for those that are turned on by this sort of thing,if it is read in that context then I suppose it just about merits half points

I think he should have wanked first ,shot all over her then fxxxxx her hairy cxxx and axxx before leaving her in a cum matted state screaming in an orgasmic fit,so there all you kill joys.

This story is very hot. The descriptions are very good. Moves a little fast though. Mom's bush and smell is very realistic and son's making extra effort is wonderful

have to do with your girlfriend, who gets a detailed intro in the first paragraph, never to reappear?

And who cares about your job if it has nothing to do with what follows?

What does any of this have to do with Prom Night?

And where the heck is the "twist"?

Sheesh! So your mommy caught you jerking off and that led to a mother-son incest romp. Sounds pretty straightforward to me. Why not call it, "Caught By Mom"?

Good luck with sticking with your title and topical paragraph the next time around...

Nice, enjoyable

It always kills me how people read a Literotica story in the incest section and say it is "disgusting." Probaby wrote this right after cumming in his underwear. This is not a great story, needs editing, but it isn't bad--and is no more disgusting than most of the stories in here. And what do you expect when the author's name is PantySniffer69? What a jerk Anonymous is!

Eliza

IF YOU CAN DO ANY BETTER, DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IF NOT ( FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

If...----------------------------------------------------------A) The mom involved wasn't repulsive. Was it your INTENT to make her seem like a severely unhygienic Chewbaca?--------------B) The title had anything to do with the story------------------------C) Useless info wasn't present (his job, the girlfriend, etc.)------------------------------------------D) It was at all believable. For fuck sakes, there was no buildup, no believability. His mom catches him jerking it and goes right to gobbling his cock without any incentive at all? No fucking dialogue even preceding it to hint at anything about to happen!

Should've called this story "Disgusting whores and poor writing."

I loved the story right till he started describing her forest after that i pretty much skipped down to here to leave a comment and saw that ppl were fighting in the comment section LOL i think the story would have been beter with half the hair but thats just me

Hot and enjoyable little tale.

What does this have to do with prom night?

Please, please use and editor,

that's what their there for...

I love the smell and taste of a hairy cunt, particularly if it is kinda pissy. Loved the story as it brought back some great memories

You went too far with the drink my piss bit that was very sick I am not going to read anymore of your stories in fear of reading more sick shit like this

46DD? I stopped reading right there